Saturday, October 08, 2011

morning

Scattered thoughts spiral, steaming coffee.
Two ducks exploring new wetlands after rain.
Morning sunlight stretches to the west.
Two yellow dogs push close for attention.
Tension unravelling, unweaving, untangled.
I take a deep breath of cold air.

inspired by the morning porch

4 comments:

Mary said...

I like it!

Isabel Doyle said...

lovely morning moment captured - loved the spiralling coffee steam

Isabel x

flaubert said...

What a beautiful poem, Janet.

Pamela

lucychili said...

Thank you Mary, Isabel, Pamela.
The inspiraion comes from David and Luisa they write poems inspired by each other. I put in the creatures and patterns for this end of the world =).