rainy afternoon fills with a beautiful oblivion,
soft, silent mystery, the world is unsaid
trees coalesce and dissolve around me
individually wrapped in white sky
inspired by Dave Bonta's morning porch
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last night the earth rumbled, walls shuffled and creaked.
tonight it is just the traffic mumbling on the freeway.
a cricket calls, a bird.
5 comments:
beautiful lines evoking beautiful moments
Incandescently gorgeous.
I so love "mumbling traffic"...
You went to many places in this piece..so much hazy..dreamy..wonderful imagery..I travelled with you..thank you.. Jae
thank you isabel, anna, iguanas and jae.
it was beautiful and misty on the way home
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