Thursday, October 13, 2011

study

Inspired by Dave Bonta, A.B.Casuga, Luisa Igloria
and Hearing 

New seedlings, white stems soft with thirst on a sunny day.
Water mists against the cloddy earth. Irises stretch their blue wings.
Sparrows, brown with a shrill chatter, scold the crows, dogs, me.
Tall trees in the park are resonant with other songs I don't recognise.
No magpies today. A hawk circles for quarry over the open grass.
Kids pedal for speed laps, counting their supremacy out loud.
Time and light drain from the day.
A four-day deadline presses home its point. Assignment waiting,
I close my curtains.


3 comments:

zongrik said...

wow. your lucky if all it takes to get focused on an assignment is to close the curtains.

Ravenblack said...

Sparrows scold. And scold quite severely as I've heard. :)

Open windows to such scenes can be distracting especially when one needs to get work done. But a look outside like this is refreshing. Nice write. :)

Victoria said...

I love how the sounds paint a perfect picture of the setting and season. Wonderful use of hearing. So glad you joined, Lucy.