Inspired by Dave Bonta's Morning Porch
rows of cubed earth , unsifted, wet
puddles, ringed with rain, glow.
beans curl through wire, new seedlings stretch
birdsong, without shadows
Saturday, December 17, 2011
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8 comments:
for something so short, you walk away with a sense of power, due to the amazing images
thank you zongrik
Exquisite. These little word paintings remind of the paintings of Condor and Withers. Quintessentially Australian and far superior to most of the poetry in the Australian poetry anthologies. These should be published.
thank you rallentanda =) would be fun to get some printed wouldn't it.
j
nice...you set a great scene and as said in few words open a small world to us...very cool..
Thanks BM
love it, beautiful.
:)
Happy Sunday.
I am slow. Happy Thursday Morning =).
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