Saturday, December 17, 2011

silver

Inspired by Dave Bonta's Morning Porch

 rows of cubed earth , unsifted, wet
puddles, ringed with rain, glow.
beans curl through wire, new seedlings stretch
birdsong, without shadows

8 comments:

zongrik said...

for something so short, you walk away with a sense of power, due to the amazing images

lucychili said...

thank you zongrik

Rallentanda said...

Exquisite. These little word paintings remind of the paintings of Condor and Withers. Quintessentially Australian and far superior to most of the poetry in the Australian poetry anthologies. These should be published.

lucychili said...

thank you rallentanda =) would be fun to get some printed wouldn't it.
j

Brian Miller said...

nice...you set a great scene and as said in few words open a small world to us...very cool..

lucychili said...

Thanks BM

Morning said...

love it, beautiful.

:)

Happy Sunday.

lucychili said...

I am slow. Happy Thursday Morning =).