Monday, December 09, 2013

monday 9

seamless,
layering of mist meets smooth grey sky.
curtains open on a tall pink rose,
blackbird arpeggios backstage.

for dverse 's Jam Tomorrow =)

12 comments:

Claudia said...

oh nice... i surely like those blackbird arpeggios... beautiful music...

Brian Miller said...

smiles...makes me think of the ballet...my wife danced for years...tight imagery in this

hey good to see you as well...

rallentanda said...

Stunning image.Delicious to the senses.

billgncs said...

dawn and hope.... seem forever linked

Mary said...

What a clear image you have crafted with only three lines! Nice.

Grace said...

Crisp and stunning imagery ~

Loredana Donovan said...

Lovely imagery ... I like the contrast of the pink rose against the gray sky.

Björn said...

How you paint with words - quite amazing

Gabriella said...

Lovely lines! I can picture it so well!

rallentanda said...

HA ha ha

How did you find that? ( 3 years ago)...they were hilarious times!
Thanks for reminding me... I had forgotten.

Good to see you back again writing these little gems.

Outlawyer said...

Very pretty poem--the sky is like a rose. I think of those as arpeggios of sight more than music,==very cool. Thanks. k. (This is Manicddaily. of wordpress.)

lucychili said...

Thank you folks.
It is nice to be writing again.
ManicK I love the idea of clouds as visual arpeggios. Lately here there have been combinations of layers with different patterns. Soft grey shapes below with scudding small wisps above.
=)