Very interesting... I fill in the spaces and I definitely see a person ..
Everyone needs an anchor in the waves..Glad to see you back againMiss Chilli:)
very cool minimalist...(hey i got through, ha)...the anchor among the waves and the vowels line esp....
i see a buoy...
haha...so cool... you certainly bring them to life... very cool... no one ever writes about them...well done
As Ricky Ricardo used to say, "Lucy, you got some 'splaining to do." Smile. We find character in everything, animate or inanimate; why not in the word itself. We profess to be wordsmiths after all; nice job with the prompt; like it.
I love this non-narrative approach to developing a character...I am partial to poetry that engages the reader in such an imaginative way.
Interesting. I must say I was a bit thrown off by your "J for dverse" line because some of your words can be seen as a description of the letter "J". Hope you'll delve into this poem for us.
The "surrounded by vowels" stills makes me think --after three reads. I tend to think of women surrounding a man (not al lover) just a man.
Interesting piece...think I need another clue though. :-)
hi vbsorry i put the j there because it is about a j and i was worried it was too vague
interesting take on a literal "character"...could be any consonant trying to anchor those vowels down :)
tight verse...I like the last line.
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